SAE Draft

Britney Abreu

05/03/2023

SAE Draft

Engl 21002

                                                                              My Self Assessment

When I first started going to school at a young age, I struggled a lot with my English course due to language barrios and speech impediment. But, this semester although it was challenging to use real world problems like race, gender, etc. I feel as if I tried my hardest to improve my writing. This semester I had to start creating a different writing style, which led to me starting to feel a bit more comfortable with expanding my techniques and preparing myself for future assignments/classes.In Phase 1 in my English 21002, our first major essay was our “Language and Literacy” essay, which had to be about language barrios, standard English, and acceptances of other dialects. This had to be my favorite essay we have written throughout the semester because I felt like I could write in a first-person narrative from past experiences. It is important to talk about language should be adapted in a educational space. I was able to use the thesis of “Language differences should be emphasized within the classroom where both standard English and acceptance of other dialects are embraced”, by developing the idea on how language barrios in school can impact someone, from personal experience and peer reviews and comments too.

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In this document, what I’ve highlighted is what I added to my essay after having peer review and conferences with my professor.

Like I stated before, this class pushed me to have a different writing style from previous writing classes. From their comments I was told to give a better explanation when it came to the quotes I provided, and expand more of my thinking on the argument I’m making. This shows how I have developed strategies for my drafting pieces, revisions, and or editing.